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. . . the little things
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. . . the little things |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
As we lie beneath the fan, bodies glistening with perspiration, I watch the little things about you I love. Your contented smile, the shyness you show by covering yourself ever so demurely, after revealing and giving yourself fully, lovingly, with abandon. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Human behaviors (little things) are sometimes funny that way... …and I'm thankful for them and I thank you for sharing. Enjoyed reading. -Bob |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
It's the little things that reveal truth. I like the intimacy of this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
*smile* Very, very nice. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
It's good to see through the eyes of love, as you so obviously have.  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
As it should be...well expressed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Her contented smile speaks volumes, Doctor Love!  You not only look at a woman ~ you see her...  EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
.........yes. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Abandon.... yes, a good word for a wonderful poem. |
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moonbeamer New Member
since 2006-08-19
Posts 1 |
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmm, good. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautifully pure and selfless, dearest friend, I believe the most spiritual love is that which not only appreciates every moment which would appear insignificant to others, but cherishes them as well, as I find it's those moments which embroider the heart with loving light and everlasting promise and warmth! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a romantic treasure, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
So sweet and loving no wonder you're aka Doctor Love beautiful... |
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