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tatalinia
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since 2005-12-17
Posts 137
CA, US

0 posted 2006-08-18 12:52 PM



So much i want to say but cant say
Lost in the mist of a cloud
Still don't know where the hell I am
Much to young to be entering this life
A mood strikes over me an I cross words with you
Betraying you ,lying to you
Two lives Im living, yours I have forsaken

Holding you as if I already lost you
Could never tell you of the things I have signed
What would you think of me now
As I smile in your face night an day
But inside holding a secret that would sweep you away
I just don't want to lose you
Now I know its how you felt with me
when I found out your life

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

© Copyright 2006 Althia Kinsey - All Rights Reserved
Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
1 posted 2006-08-18 12:42 PM


I enjoyed the natural feeling of this one, and the tension you built.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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