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James_A_Fraser
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Out Making Anticlines


0 posted 08-17-2006 08:12 PM       View Profile for James_A_Fraser   Email James_A_Fraser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for James_A_Fraser


drive away

please
only drive
away

this
one time
turn and
drive
away away
donít
look back

donít see me
like this
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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 08-17-2006 08:31 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

ohh....

so poignant...

nicely done, sir.
Honeybunch
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2 posted 08-18-2006 02:13 AM       View Profile for Honeybunch   Email Honeybunch   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Honeybunch's Home Page   View IP for Honeybunch

But to allow someone to see, to know the truth, is such a wonderful gift even if that person is not fully aware of what they have been given.  They will be one day.
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3 posted 08-18-2006 09:00 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

SweetJaime~

I can only offer this electronic *hug*,
knowing it is not enough~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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4 posted 08-18-2006 12:26 PM       View Profile for Pilgrimage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pilgrimage

Oh, that's gorgeous.  So few words, so much emotion conveyed.  You're a master of pain.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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5 posted 08-18-2006 12:52 PM       View Profile for seraphin   Email seraphin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for seraphin

The above comments agreed with fully. I can think of nothing more to add.

Sandra
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Jamie

The tear is not built of shame, but of feeling...like this poem.  
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donít see me
like this

As if all partings aren't hard enough... the pain of this plea tears right through a heart for there is no hope... all the good is gone. Superb wring from a tender heart! *S*
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8 posted 03-31-2007 08:01 AM       View Profile for dingusjr   Email dingusjr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dingusjr

Wow...found this one somehow.  Best 22 words I have ever read.  Man, wow.
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