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aziza
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0 posted 2006-08-17 03:44 AM


Chocolate Dreams

Chocolate dreams sweetened
with acerbic wit
Eyes lost in fantasies of confection
spiced with sarcasm
and quick retorts

aziza

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2006-08-17 01:23 PM


You've gotten kinda negative here, but the words play out well

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

LeeJ
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2 posted 2006-08-17 02:40 PM


I liked...
Pilgrimage
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3 posted 2006-08-17 03:04 PM


I read the title, and I had to read the poem!  You have a wonderful talent.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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