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XOx Uriah xOX
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0 posted 2006-08-17 02:39 AM



Ye dwellers in this hamlet,
With all your pomp and fine array,
Have a tortured soul within your midst ;
Whom, to your taloned tongues, fell prey !
'Twould show more mercy if you'd stab him...
Far less suffering would be done ;
For knife wounds heal much faster,
And leave less scarring than the tongue !
                                            
Years of slanderous gossip
Have turned him into a recluse ;
He dares not show himself by day,
For fear of more abuse.
By day he's abed,
an emotional invalid;
Sometimes brave enough to venture forth by night.
Before he's dealt the final blow...
I'd like you to Ecce Homo...
Behold the man...
His name is Philip Wright.
                                          
Upon backtracking Philip's history, ( ficticious gossip being ommited )
I could not find a single crime that this man had committed ;
As I searched the bits of evidence, the most damaging fact I found,
Was that as a child, he had been cursed, to grow up in your town.
He was obviously a dreamer. His manner was distinct.
An individual in thought and style of dress.
Reports say... He was "different" than the other boys in town ;
Meaning... He was probably not as shallow as the rest.
It seems that it all began, when Philip was a lad...
Labeled "odd" and threatening... The engineer of all things bad.
Whatever offense was committed and whoever the offender may be...
To find the culprit, there was no need for thought to linger.
Heaven above forbid that it should be one of their kids ;
So, to the strange child down the road, they'd point their finger.
That's the way it started and its yet to find an end ;
And through the years the lies have escalated.
Even when there were no crimes, with a villian yet to find...
Within their minds, more tales were fabricated.
                                          
Back in Philip's childhood,
the tormenting begins...
The town had found a fitting Scapegoat,
upon which to lay their sins.
                                          
He was just a yeanling, roaming through their fields ;
A solitary lamb who'd gone astray.
The wolves contrived and gathered and sought to bring him down ;
The lamb survived, but was left frazzled by the fray.
Now... Years later... Having tasted of his blood...
They still keep a hungry eye upon the fields ;
And if by chance they spy him, on a watchful walk-about...
Once again, they're snapping... Biting at his heels !
Because of this... His fruit is unripened.  
His branch has never bloomed.
He cowers under night and curses day.
His life has never prospered.  
The world does not make room ...
For little black sheep that go astray.
                                          
Often times, he thought of leaving...
Another life, another town ;
Should he not see this place again, he would not grieve.
But, the years crept up too quickly,
And in latter days he found...
He now lacked the youth and courage it took to leave.
This town had been his home and all he'd ever known.
To leave it now...  He had no heart to try.
Although he had no taste for being scorned and abased,
Here he will spend his stifled life and here... He'll die.
Time and seasons will abrade the epitaph from his grave ;
No legacy to leave on his demise ;
Although he'd lived upright...  It plagued him day and night...
To know his immorality would be immortalized.
                                          
Black-hearted judges, armed with verbal sticks and stones.
'Neath the weight of sins, the goat's knees bend...
No friends to hear his moans .
Deceitful little demagogues dance...
With all their pomp and swagger...
While the tongue stung Scapegoat bleats...
For the mercy of the dagger.

© Copyright 2006 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
1 posted 2006-08-17 02:50 AM


Many years ago some countries had one person who was elected "The Sin Eater". He had to take on the sins for everyone in town and live the life of a recluse.This sent me there. enjoyed.

[This message has been edited by latearrival (08-18-2006 03:50 PM).]

divine chaos
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon
2 posted 2006-08-17 08:07 AM


I grew up in a town like the one you describe.  Finally broke free at 24, but ended up going back a few years later during a crisis, to be close to my family.  It hadn't changed a bit .. the weight of the town was so much that I couldn't breathe -- luckily, this little black sheep made it to the mountain top again less than a year ago .. the air is cleaner here

you've described it so well
great job!

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2006-08-17 08:22 AM


Uriah,
I am sure this will touch many a soul.
Enjoyed the read.

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2006-08-17 10:32 AM


Most people today would not recognize a scapegoat (or a guilt catcher) if they bumped into one because they are too busy throwing out guilt, willy nilly, somehow knowing there is someone or something out there that will "catch" it all.

Well done, indeed!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

silentmage13
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since 2005-11-20
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Florida
5 posted 2006-08-17 01:27 PM


I can only say one thing: WOW!!!!
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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6 posted 2006-08-17 02:39 PM


I am constantly mezmorized by the expertise of the writers in PIP and (you) are no exception...

love your ability to color out stories....

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