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deasomnians
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0 posted 2006-08-16 12:24 PM


Prince Charming

A different robe adorns
The prince of my dreams,
Whose happily-ever-after kiss,
More venomous than the apple,
Can’t awake me from my sleep,
Because I refuse to let it.
When the clock struck midnight,
The glass slipper shattered
Its splintered shards into my sole.
My soul fared not much better.

"Nature has implanted in our minds an insatiable longing to seek the truth" - CJCL Convention Theme 2005

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1 posted 2006-08-18 12:24 PM


nice play on words, sole/soul
and that robed character
was not a terribly charming prince

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