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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-08-16 08:04 AM



sous la pluie
nous sommes la mauvaise eau
in the rain
we are bad water

nous péché lentement
le bon beau, aimable
we sin slowly
the good kind, lovely

les fenêtres nous connaissent
en tant que rire vulgaire
the windows know us
as vulgar laughter

nous sommes des penchants
annoncer la chaleur de l'amour
we are addictions
melding the heat of love

nous sommes plaisir foncé
we are dark pleasure


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daark

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1 posted 2006-08-16 08:30 AM


Merci....you ARE pleasure m'dark friend...You have often left me with a sigh, but this one big guy, just steals ones breath away.....and?  I have always loved a man....with his own brand of accent...           

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-08-16 08:42 AM


ms gs..you smile me lady, thanks for your touch
LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-08-16 09:18 AM


oscuro adrado ante las animo
mero tierra confitar
comparent
en nue intimate idioma

steamy

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-08-16 09:43 AM


ms leej...dang I like it when you speak spinach to me..thannnnnks lady friend
The Lady
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5 posted 2006-08-16 11:53 AM




basculez votre bébé lentement
foncé
sous la pluie
dans beau péché

appréciez la douleur douce


seraphin
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6 posted 2006-08-16 12:01 PM


Et de nouveau, vous m'avez capturé. Votre cadeau est joyeux.

Sandra

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7 posted 2006-08-16 04:00 PM


lady one,
la agonie peut être belle, oui ?
Thanks to you
________________

ms sandra, mon plaisir, toujours
and thanks to you for the review

aziza
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8 posted 2006-08-17 03:12 AM


:: smiles with pleasure ::

Sunshine
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9 posted 2006-08-17 07:32 AM



Penchant,

indeed.




Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2006-08-17 08:03 AM


ms az, cute smile!!..now what on earth are you thinking...not about chocolate again? thanks lady


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ms sun, shhhhhhh I heard the giggle, thanks hon

Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2006-08-18 04:42 PM


just wanted to hear that lil accent,
again.  

this is very much, worth the second read...

and the one after that...

and after that...lol...

you get the picture yes?  

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2006-08-18 05:01 PM


ms gs..yes I get the picture, and enjoyed the view, thanks ms
Klassy Lassy
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13 posted 2006-08-18 11:08 PM


It's a good thing the language of love remains the same, because I forgot any French I ever knew,  except "je t'aime".

It was fun to read again.  Thank you for the interpretations.  I would have been lost without them.

~ K  

Ceinwyn
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14 posted 2006-08-21 07:08 PM


I think you have a following with the women folk of pip...what spell did you cast upon them?

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

MGROVES
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15 posted 2006-08-21 11:47 PM


your are a pleasure, in the dark & in the light-

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Dark Stranger
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16 posted 2006-08-22 07:15 AM


ms kl, thanks for the eyes lady friend..the fre'spea was just backroom whisper talk..

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ms cwn'  spell number 03 I think...write about your world and others will look in the windows?  thanks ms

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ms groves, thank you lady friend for always being close to the glass

Klassy Lassy
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17 posted 2006-08-23 02:03 PM


So, I gathered.  Even in French, whispers take two...
Dark Stranger
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18 posted 2006-08-23 02:14 PM


ms kl...no whisper can be a whisper
unless it is heard by another..thanks lady friend

Beki
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19 posted 2006-08-24 02:22 PM


I like this very much! The french with the english  perfect!
Dark Stranger
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20 posted 2006-08-24 02:37 PM


ms beki, a bit of combine, thanks lady friend
Neotec
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21 posted 2006-08-24 11:49 PM


to bad the one that knows french no longer lives with me she would find it a nice read. i might point her that way unless she has already.
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