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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813
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Everafter prepared, Heavenly places in waiting. Faith's knocking and death the not so simple requirement to open the door. This world’s welcome wore thin years ago, and though alive and kicking, Hope's heart is sorely beating. Life is what keeps me here but homesick am I for evermore. [This message has been edited by luminosity (08-15-2006 09:11 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
a heavenly scout  I enjoyed! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
thank you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
luminosity You have a conundrum. Enjoyed the read. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sweetie~ 'Life is what keeps me here' Though the heart often wishes to go beyond the here and now ... it cannot be rushed ... it simply cannot be rushed~ Life needs you to live it ... for hopefully many years to come~ When He is ready ... you will be too~  Love you dear lady~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
thank you dear lady, I do know you are right, and *shrug* this was supposed to be a happy poem, the opposite of nevermore, but somehow it came out sad as well... this life has taken much from me, and I look for the afterlife more than ever...sigh |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She is ready, at 97.5 plus, to go... what keeps me here? she asks, looking into some other denseness... "you've still a lesson to share..." or, "maybe your invite got lost in the mail..." She chuckles, and sighs. "I never thought I'd get this old." |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
seymore...I don't even know what a conundrum is so how can I create one? lol thank you for reading and enjoying James, thank you Sunshine...lady, your writing skills and talent shine in every word you write...and yep, as long as there are words to share, I guess that's why He keeps me here...thank you lady |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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