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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you wore secrets under white but they showed through when summer was saliva and your skin was gypsy that pouted her wicked under the skimpy flims I new your eyes then when you had on the vervey and devil touched urges that made your ankles dance with the helpless want too's when your voice was cry music and you dictated sweet permission ___________ daark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Unstoppable revolutionary strength is always perceived in the clarity of your visuals... this is profound ambition, taking us deep into the human spell of attraction, seeing the reality of love, still loving someone when it can be most difficult… |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You draw her lady pretty, sir... now sing her dance and step her lightly... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms leej, thanks babe!! I do like what music does to folks...like it is it's own woman helpless within herself to not seduce. ______________ ms sun, will you save me a couple of slow turns along the overlook..thanks ms |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dark~ I find your poetry intoxicating ... no one writes a thought quite as uniquely as you do~ I find myself reading you over and over and over again~ That's the highest compliment that I can offer to you~ *Huglets* on a Tuesday~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
how very beautiful the cry music you gift the world to hear. loved this one big guy.  seek the flame within yourself |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms marge, your reads just once are a blessing, your return reviews are wordless in smile miles to me, thanks lady friend. ______________ ms gs, thank you for resting your eyes there at the hinge of this moment. |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
and the syrup words pour slowly over me. Pacified, but for never long enough. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger cry music is often the reward for finding secrets under white well done... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sandra, thanks for still wanting more _______________ lady one, yes mon j, white is so lovely when it is discarded..thanks ms |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You kind of reach inside me with your words - it's a grab my breath and hold it til I reach the last word kind of thing. aziza |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, I am blessed to have your eyes waiting on my humble words, thanks ms |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Pretty woman, or pretty music? One and the same, perhaps. I always thought gypsy skin was beautiful, the sun incarnate in Peasant blouses and swirling skirts -- around dancing ankles. (This from the original paleface!  ) |
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perfect stranger Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 54on cloud 9 |
just loved this poem,read it over and over,brilliant. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kl, yes, the gypsy sin skin...seems to weep sensual, thank you for your pale eye smiles ms. ______________ perfect, thank you for the tour of my pen |
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