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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2006-08-15 06:58 AM



Arthur Whoo?

There it is, a tightness again,
upper shoulder-neck in strain.
It's thoughts that swirl and spin my brain.
Then body wakes to more of pain.

Arthur's come to visit me.
Oh boy! How happy can I be?
He's resting here, upon my plane
and in these words of my refrain.

A host I'm not, to entertain
and have to spend this day's campaign
releasing Arthur, can't bear his reign...
so I declare "M-inent domain."

And rest my case of Arthur Whoo
and send him elsewhere, how about you?
Need a guest for a day or two?
Ok, ok, I guess I'm through~~

It's time I see to say "adieu"



M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-08-15 07:07 AM


Arthur is most certainly ruthless....this was a fine articulation of an unforgiving visitor of which I hope you are not made to endure...


nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
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2 posted 2006-08-15 07:20 AM


Thanks Lee... just playing with words and feelings...I totally "over-did" cleaning and preparing this weekend and am paying for it now...stiff neck and shoulder...need to ease it out. Guess Arthur and age are out to get me today.


M

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