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Abiola
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since 2006-08-09
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0 posted 2006-08-14 07:38 PM



I need time to understand me that is wat i say.......

because wat i see isn't wat u see. The tears that hide

behind this face is breaking down little by little. I can't

even seem to hide them any longer but i am. All the

unawareness and disparity i have are flashing back and

forth in front of my eyes and i can't seem to stake them

out. I need time to realize that i'm burning a big hole

in my heart with all the desperation and fear i have. I'm

on a path to notice i went through too many pain and

sorrow to let them just vanish like that. I see them all

around me in me and i can't seem to let them go away.

I don't understand how i could let this be in me for soo

long, but it's stabbing me in my heart over and over

again.. Guess wat i'm beginning to like it. Beside wat

can i do but to just go on with it? My life will soon be ........

Abiola

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seraphin
Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan
1 posted 2006-08-14 07:57 PM


Abiola,
Listen to me, for I've seen some mighty rough stuff kid, and I'm still kickin'.
You have been gifted with "a poet's heart" and that simply means you will see things no normal eyes will ever see. Do not doubt me on this, as I see things so very well, and I've been legally blind since I was 10 years old. That's a heck of a lot of years abiola. You need to give yourself the room to flow. Write out your pain, put it on paper, and let it fly honey. Then get on with it. If it takes writing it out a dozen times, just do it. We will heal. We will go on. We will continue to enlighten, no matter how dark our own personal worlds become. It IS the writers way.
You stay strong.

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