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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2006-08-14 12:32 PM

there were good moments
though too few and far between
to shore foundation

indifference reigns
silence screams in agony
words fall deaf to ear

divorce no option
no biblical precedence
no authority

uncomfortable
the soul craves salving presence
inconsolable

Christ the salvation
the emotional outlet
remains in the pen

but believe in love
love is THE reality
the greatest of gifts

therefore you will love
and you will write about love
‘til your pen is stilled

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-08-14 12:57 PM

~sigh~
in love's capture
until we die

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

2 posted 2006-08-14 01:11 PM

Sad poem. This is why I wrote the two I had to write. Love should be fun, laughter and sharing the good things. best to you, martyjo

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2006-08-14 03:29 PM

midnitesun ~
Thanx for the sigh. I could use a hug, too

martyjo ~
Sad?
Ya think so?
Kinda depends how you view it I guess.
If it made you think, then I did good

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2006-08-14 07:20 PM

swells of space
shall never drift apart
true hearts that learn to ride
love's roughest waves,
but shall capsize swiftly
when floating foul flotsam and jetsom

silent indifference lies
heart hugs to you, loper

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2006-08-14 11:49 PM

made me think
and you did good...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2006-08-14 11:57 PM

here is the hope of it:

but believe in love
love is THE reality
the greatest of gifts

And within this hope,
lies the seed;

and His tears
will still reap
a bounty.

Well done, Poet.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2006-08-15 10:23 AM

Midniteswun ~
Your replies are NOT supposed to be better than my offering ... but I forgive you

The Lady ~
Then I did good! Thank you

Sunshine ~
As the Tall Texan scuffs his boot toe in the dust he replies, "Thank you, ma'am!"

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2006-08-15 10:39 AM

Loper~

Believing in love
Stretching reaches of the heart
In softest surround~

**You inspire others so easily**
Thank you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

artexeres
Member

since 2006-08-01

Posts 156
south africa

9 posted 2006-08-15 10:49 AM

I loved this piece of poetry thank you, love only searches for its self, and only gives of its self, that is love?

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2006-08-15 01:47 PM

Well now there Tall Texan, I needed to read something just like this today.....Love indeed......nicely written sir.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

11 posted 2006-08-15 03:17 PM

Marge ~
How I love Tindal's l'il tidbits

artexeres ~
I'm happy you enjoyed

Gentle Spirit ~
Thank you ma'am

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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