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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the complications of dreamery butter spread on the half toasted awakening like pausing to breathe between languid comma's between comas you unraveled my jeans with your eyes and clacked the metal zippers like snap candy on your teeth addiction to the superficial perhaps while kneading the core of me and pricking your palms on the softness of my brittality soothing me with your salve saliva and didn't I mention about the scars just being other erogenous zones with androgynous applicability for that certain someone taking the time to pry into the reopening of my favorite wounds _________________ daark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
etching the meaning of light, yoga curls of raspberry lips buzzing green light to shamanisum... |
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kif kif Member
since 2006-06-01
Posts 439BCN |
ha ha! "dreamery butter", so good, as is "applicability". Tasty. |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
*smile* sometimes, that says just enough. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
'half toasted awakening' and 'dreamery butter' --what good images you sprinkled through here. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
LOVE your word play and imagery - damn I LOVE this! I think that you're one of the most talented and creative poets I've ever read - just don't let it go to your head too much now  Your so clever, you must have been a woman in a past life  Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"like pausing to breathe " breathe hell... who can breathe and read this at the same time I agree with Melissa you had to be a woman |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You remind me favorably of another poet who twisted stories into favorite repasts and left the reader wanting more. Yes... he had a gift for flight of fancy, himself. Well done, Sir. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you, to each of you..you are too kind with your words... Leej you bless me, kifkif I am pleased to have your visit, thank you, sandra, slow hugs for the eyes, nan friend, humble thanks to you, mel' every man is always part woman and visa versa??ladyone, spank you very much, ms sun, am pleased to remind you of another |
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