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Did I Tell You?
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Did I Tell You? |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Did I Tell You? Did I tell you about the snow on the flowers? The day was hot in the valley and snowing in the pass. And the flowers wore a cloak of snow over precious petals of delicate color. Did I tell you? Did I tell you about the clear running stream? The water was rushing in the gully and pushing over the rocks. And the music from the currents played a natural tune of melodious harmony. Did I tell you? Did I tell You about the wind chimes on the porch? Silver utensils were hanging from the beam and playing a story in the breeze. And the view of the mountains so high created an art that no painter could create. Did I tell you? Did I tell you about the love deep within me? It bubbles over from my heart and reaches out from my eyes and voice. And if I had more to share with you I would tell you my thoughts, my dreams, my longings. Did I tell you? Did I tell you? aziza |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nope, but you just did and I'm glad  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
an engulfing flow of love so perfectly penned |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Sharing the beauty we see around us with a loved one ~ nothing stronger than a tie like that and if no one there with which to share how bleak a world it would be. Best to you, martyjo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
aziza Well you told us now. A delight to read.  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a wonderful offering. Did I tell you I have just such a wind chime on my back porch Did I tell you this is a Lovely work! This is a grand piece of work! ~*~ did I ever say your writing is inspiring consider it said Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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