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FNG
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0 posted 2006-08-12 01:35 AM


Life is beautiful, aint it?

This night,
I've decided
it's ethereal
as fibers of
withered greens.

Air suffused
with quiet laden peace.
A time to shovel,
the true me within.

Taking breaths,
envisioning,
the sun rays,
or should i come to null?

End my story here,
reckoned a myth of ever-afters?
I've learnt to wait, stay and frame
in this moment of mental game.

The first dose of sunrays
will radiate,
comb my face for a journey yet ahead.


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1 posted 2006-08-12 04:30 PM


FNG~

'A time to shovel,
the true me within.'


Yes, I found myself in these lines~

Life IS beautiful ... yes, it is~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 2006-08-12 05:21 PM


just what I was thinking today!
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