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he lays her down (charcoal man and his lady)

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The Lady
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charcoal man
turns dream sheets  
wipes lady’s bare feet  
with cool  
lays her back  
shadow hair floats on pillow  
he reaches to touch  
push back  

palm of his hand  
wears white scar    
gift from her anger  
congo memory
wraps itself around her mind
bites
she whimpers  
brings the white to red lips  
lays kiss  
where she wounded him

eye to eye
she whispers him
I fell where the demon
lies
my heart sore
told me
lay him low
yet I craved you
with my soul
with my holy soul

   I know darlin’
   I know
   hush now
  
he moves scar
warm
to place she dreams it

she is hushed

© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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1 posted 08-12-2006 12:47 AM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

You had me leaning in and reading ... I love them.  I just love them.
1slick_lady
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morning...
a new cup of coffee and ...you

yummy
Dark Stranger
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whiser of scar
on trembling places
does the warm chill
when the basta strums

sinsual work lady one
divine chaos
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Lady, ya make me wanna purrrr

just

yum!

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

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Wanna purr?

Oh shoot...just do it!

Excellent reading, Lady!

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The Lady
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Thank you aziza
I love them too
they keep me awake
with their story

morning Helen
glad they flavored
your coffee

oh yes Stranger
the warm chills
when the basta strums
thank you

purr Sheli
I sure do

thank you so much
Karilea


vandana
thank you
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 08-14-2006 11:26 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Kate~
It is such a pleasure to see a poet handle soft, sensual thoughts in such a dignified and stirring manner~

I felt this was such a delicate read~
THANK YOU~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Deep in the heart


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hushed for but a while
longing cannot be contained
craving satisfied

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

The Lady
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thank you so much
for your kind words
Marge


craving cannot be satisfied
wisely said  
Dr. Love

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Enjoyed...James
The Lady
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Thank you, James.
aziza
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Charcoal Man and his Lady have come into my heart and made a home.
The Lady
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thank you aziza
I'm glad you like them
Gentle Spirit
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15 posted 08-22-2006 07:23 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

I am loving this series, so very much!
The Lady
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thank you
Gentle Spirit
more to come...
  
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Your touch of sensuality brings to simmer
the bloods of many...well done Lady.
Gentle Spirit
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I will be waiting and looking for more!!  
The Lady
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thank you so much
Barry


Gentle Spirit...
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ummm......you dont make sense at all....

This is the only life you have, so live it to be remembered

The Lady
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laughing...

I don't usually
make sense
when these
two are around...

Snowflake From Hell
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i thought it was a nice read

Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride

The Lady
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thank you Snowflake!  

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hushed by day, alive at night.
the dark and light is good to see.
a lust so held, yet given into,
with a deamon in check and heaven above.

so lovely with words and the light and dark : )
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