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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2006-08-11 11:35 AM



lying here entwined
intricately disordered
lovingly scrambled

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2006 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
divine chaos
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1 posted 2006-08-11 11:43 AM


i'm not sure i've ever commented
on the little word gifts you leave behind
when you visit the blue pages
(I was busy throwing things)
I read so many when I should be working
and can't take the time to comment right then

but I'm growing very fond of your work
and find myself searching you out
when I come to read

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

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with you
2 posted 2006-08-11 12:14 PM


passionate chaos
wrapped up in each other's arms
a beautiful mess


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3 posted 2006-08-11 12:23 PM


Sheli ~
your eyes caress me
well, at least my work, that is
which we both enjoy

Susan ~
loving disorder
enfolded in your embrace
turmoil and bedlam

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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4 posted 2006-08-11 12:30 PM




~Lovers tangle is
Right where I most want to be
Wrapped up in my work~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

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5 posted 2006-08-11 12:52 PM


Marge ~
such good work it is
little tidbits of Tindal
a lover of words

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

LeeJ
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6 posted 2006-08-11 01:11 PM


once again, you say so much with so few words...   I like
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2006-08-11 01:26 PM


Interloper
Well done. LOL

Martie
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8 posted 2006-08-11 02:32 PM


Interloper....sure sounds better than eggs!
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9 posted 2006-08-11 02:37 PM


I want mornings like this... and evenings... and nights... and... yes!!! *G*
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10 posted 2006-08-11 02:44 PM


LeeJ ~ I'm glad you enjoyed

Sy ~ Thanx for the support!

Martie ~ Gee, I never thought of adding eggs

suthern ~ Yes, yes, and YES!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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11 posted 2006-08-11 04:47 PM


This sounds like a state of beauty that would be very nice to be in, and your economy of words make it an even better poem, each word considered before being chosen, thank you....

Goldenrose.

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2006-08-11 06:11 PM




Time in its keeping
Brings a smile to this poet
Possibilities~


***Edited by my own little self after a conscientious objector objected to the 'possibility' of my thoughts not fitting
the rating for the Open Forums***

Thanks PiPReporter ... I'm gracious enough to respect most views, even if they differ from mine~



~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (08-12-2006 09:56 AM).]

Kristabell
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13 posted 2006-08-11 06:18 PM


Nice haiku. Loved this.

Kristabell

"Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life."

ThisDiamond
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14 posted 2006-08-11 06:59 PM


Highest compliment I can pay you...
You inspire!

Forwarned
Staring into the sun
Only to see stars


Wonderful style

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