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ballajosue
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0 posted 2006-08-11 05:08 AM




It lasted like a worthy rival did to Michael Jordan,
making of asses traveled in plentiful.
I remember back when i had family;
my cousin had a funny crush on a dorky guy named gordon.
Fun times were spent poking fun.

This is unbelievable, i hate it;
with a freakin passion.
words repeated more than a daily dose
of a saint’s prayers.

While the trix’s build an empire,
i just do like a ghost and roam
knowing that the time will come
for those

ghost dont hurt, but damn sure cause fear.
i know because ive been through this
for years.

Sometimes I don’t know what to do with myself
Passion takes over me

I’m halfway through and i really haven’t been
paying attention;
i just give the hand a pencil,
and this is what happens.
when its finished,
i read
and approve.

In my sail toward social standard perfection
somehow the mind skipped the tought that nothing is ever perfect.
and let us not forget fire is the devil’s only friend.

live for art, passion and to make “stereotype” just another word.

I hate math but the atmosphere noted that the world keeps a balance,
through mathematics; defined by whatever you’ve added and subtracted.

I do literature; but its adding time.
and the great ones dont need inspiration,
they inspire themselves.

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2006-08-11 03:37 PM


Thinking on your many thoughts in this one...


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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2006-08-11 04:00 PM


Obviously I am not gr8 and I DO need inspiration.  Inspiration is stimulation.

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2006-08-11 04:06 PM


I was thinking the same Interloper, but I didn't want to say it~~


ballajosue
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4 posted 2006-08-11 09:09 PM


well its not meant like that, what is meant  is that most people need someone to inspire them, to push them and help them get to a higher level, where as the great ones dont need to be pushed, they push themselves.
ballajosue
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5 posted 2006-08-11 09:13 PM


its a common saying in sports, i forgot to mention.
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