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Interloper
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Deep in the heart


0 posted 08-10-2006 12:13 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Interloper


I wrote a letter
the words weren’t significant
unless you read them

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2006 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 08-10-2006 12:54 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


POW!

It is always a give of self
in order that understanding
occurs.

Well done!

Earth Angel
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2 posted 08-10-2006 01:58 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

I would like to echo Sun's rays, "WOW!"

Love, Light, & Letters,
EA
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3 posted 08-10-2006 02:15 PM       View Profile for brother stone   Email brother stone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brother stone

this is a feeling brother stone knows so well i could put my name on your poem too

i am sorry you had to write this
Interloper
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4 posted 08-10-2006 02:45 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Sunshine ~ Boom! Thanx for the read

EA ~ Zowie! I'm glad you enjoyed

brother stone ~ Nothing personal in the write.  Just some thoughts that came together.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Pilgrimage
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5 posted 08-10-2006 04:00 PM       View Profile for Pilgrimage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pilgrimage

Oh excellent!  I love the way you turned this on its head.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Interloper
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Pilgrimage ~ Thank you.  I think your first time to comment on one of my pieces

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

SEA
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with you


7 posted 08-10-2006 06:36 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

funny, I was feeling exactly this yesterday
passing shadows
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8 posted 08-10-2006 07:48 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

yep...understood here
David D Jerald
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9 posted 08-10-2006 07:59 PM       View Profile for David D Jerald   Email David D Jerald   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit David D Jerald's Home Page   View IP for David D Jerald

Dear Interloper, You hit that one with your poets hammer right on the nail head.
Well done.
Dave
Honeybee
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10 posted 08-10-2006 08:40 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

I'd also like to echo "Wow!"
~powerful senryu!

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

deasomnians
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11 posted 08-10-2006 10:22 PM       View Profile for deasomnians   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for deasomnians

That's an eye-opener. Excellent observation.

"Nature has implanted in our minds an insatiable longing to seek the truth" - CJCL Convention Theme 2005

seraphin
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12 posted 08-10-2006 11:34 PM       View Profile for seraphin   Email seraphin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for seraphin

my goodness, you're good!
HopeS
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13 posted 08-11-2006 12:29 AM       View Profile for HopeS   Email HopeS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HopeS's Home Page   View IP for HopeS

I know that feeling , this was touching

Hope
Interloper
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14 posted 08-11-2006 10:35 AM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Susan ~ Don't tell me you are, once again, strolling thru my brain  

passing shadows ~ So nice to hear from you again!

David ~ Some would say I was the one that got hit on the head with a hammer  

Honeybee ~ Many wowerful thanx!

deasomnians ~ Thank you for the gracious comment.

seraphin ~ The Tall Texan scuffs the toe of his boot in the dust feeling prideful embarrassment.

Hope ~ You comment touches me, too  


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.
CocoBaci
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15 posted 01-09-2007 12:26 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

What can I say....  A gem...
*~coco~*
 
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