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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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some times my mind goes there uninvited to the hem of you and you think it is just the wind you dance your woman with I hear the sound of your voice within the voice you offer as a lover's gift to my mind that secret voice that speaks and tells of things usually unsaid as if you are talking to my hands telling them to touch you on the inside of your outside deeper than just the seam on the soul side of you perhaps in delicate repossession of the someone you never gave except for when you wore my windows __________ daark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
deeper than just the seam on the soul side of you perhaps in delicate repossession of the someone you never gave except for when you wore my windows (sigh) outstanding, your mind....and ability to express love... Repossession of the someone you never gave...sheesh... you leave me speechless... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is amazing I am in awe of your writing Thank you for sharing these exquisite thoughts Liz |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms leej, thanks hon for leaning over the fence and whispering __________ ms liz, thanks lady friend for the touch |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
*sighs* so lovely, DS you always leave me in awe of your word weaving talent ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
who says you are uninvited?! Certainly not me....   |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkOne~ You gave me a Friday sigh to wear on Thursday~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms shele' thanks lady friend for your reviews. _________ suesea, got your windows open? thanks lady friend ______________ ms marge friend, thanks to you little one, let's pretend everyday is Friday shall we? |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
simmering summer sounds, these...  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
for you? always D...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks for the eyes on the morning ____________ ms suesea, are you reading my mind now? thanks again |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "deeper than just the seam on the soul side of you" The most beautiful part of anyone, and often so hidden. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Quite simply, you sweep me away with the beauty of how your words weave among each other. You are an artist and keep me spell bound. aziza |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, thanks neighbor lady for being close in this thought. ______________ ms az, you make me smile and a bit of blush too, thanks babe |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"on the inside of your outside" oh my |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
"telling them to touch you on the inside of your outside" (swallowing hard) I like this soooooooooooooo much. Sandra |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady one, thanks for the eyes and the whisper _____________ ms sandra, thanks for the swallow, and the read |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sighs....this is a sensual stunner, and of course I'm saving it with all the other poetry I've saved by you. (even though I may not always find the time to reply to your poems, I always read every one of them). The way you continue to weave words and themes with your own brilliance and uniqueness still awes me....methinks I have to rethink my poetry skills and just learn from your muse Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Falling through Daark windows right into infinity mirrors, I find myself marveling at the nuances of shadows. They dance, too, against the silence of a single flame. Beautiful. |
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artexeres Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 156south africa |
phew, artists use paint, you use words, now and hereafter even as of old, we will speak forth of love? a very good poem well done. |
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