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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-08-10 02:38 AM


Fly

You can fly among the tree tops
and soar among the trees.
You need no halo to be an angel,
Don't you really see?
You bring me joy,
you make me smile
You share your heart with love
You brighten up my darkest days
radiating sunlight from above.
You can fly among the mountains
and glide along the lands.
The only thing that truly matters
is the love you cradle in your hands.

aziza

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-08-10 10:25 AM


precious
HopeS
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2 posted 2006-08-10 11:53 AM


So true we can take flights anywhere with loving hearts to share

Hope

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-08-10 12:04 PM


I really like folks who write of love

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

David D Jerald
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since 2006-08-07
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4 posted 2006-08-10 09:48 PM


Dear Aziza, Your poem is born of hope that love never dies. It is a nice poem. But when love dies and it will ..hang on cause your going to go crashing into the ground. You did good though I still liked it.
Dave

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
5 posted 2006-08-11 12:07 PM


Thank you all for enjoying my thoughts .

David,
I have crashed before,
but I refuse to quit flying.

aziza

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