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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2006-08-09 07:42 AM



architect of ancient stones
footprinter hidden
under the sand's round teeth

still you walk the tides of evening
as odin drags his sword
down the metal misted fiords

the iron man bathed his sins
in the laughing lathering
and founders his guiltless

face down in leathery nectar
the sweating saliva's sorcery
conjured from a vixen's bosoms

his god is of black gold wield
below the blood of indigo ice
but he is blind to the treasury

that his fingers can never taste
_____________

daark

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seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan
1 posted 2006-08-09 09:33 AM


myohmyohmyohmyohmyohmy.

captured...once again

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
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California
2 posted 2006-08-09 09:52 AM


DS....If he were blind, he would not be able to write of it so well.  
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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3 posted 2006-08-09 09:59 AM


I think he is not nearly blind, more so aware and full of wisdom.

Exceptional write yet again!

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
4 posted 2006-08-09 10:29 AM


thanks ladies, sera, martie and leej
you bless me

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
5 posted 2006-08-09 10:33 PM




blind?

has he not ears to see?

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
6 posted 2006-08-10 07:22 AM


lady one...I wonder???  the virginity of alaska still whispers and now we see the hungry mouths wanting to nurse her dark milk before she births her glory...thanks hon
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