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Open Poetry #38

Cold

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

0 posted 2006-08-08 07:03 PM

Yearning for
a simple kiss.
Reassurance
the
only
thing
needed.
For one more night
of peace
would feel like gold.
And one more fight
could end my world.
Somehow lost myself
for loving you,
and my heart
can't
take
it back.

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

1 posted 2006-08-10 12:22 PM

Yes.

For one more night
of peace
would feel like gold.
And one more fight
could end my world.

I have felt this.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-08-10 10:31 AM

bittersweet and definately know the feeling of this...

well done!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2006-08-10 01:20 PM

kiss me once again
let our love overcome all
before all is lost

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2006-08-10 02:27 PM

Trust Doctor Love (Interloper) ~ He knows whereof he speaks! He's an expert on the subject.

Love & Light,
EA

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2006-08-10 04:38 PM

Thank you for the comments. It's starting to come back to me again...writing is a good outlet for my mixed up brain.

Interloper, I appreciate that, a lot. Good advice.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2006-08-10 06:10 PM

glad you are writing again

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