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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2006-08-08 06:18 PM



Vacation of the Mind

I wasted the day, a vacation of mind
looked up to the sky for its warming to find.
Instead there were wisps, so fluffy above,
got up to get camera, a labor of love.

Though not funny a story, nor humorous at glance
to have seen me try capturing with sort of a dance
as I whirled with the breezing to catch just one wisp
I had to take 3 to get one pictured crisp...

So here is the photo, my vacation of mind.
A day that I wasted except for this find:


    


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2006 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2006-08-08 11:36 PM


M,
Silly girl, lay down on the ground when you take those pics! Hope you didn't get too dizzy.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Toerag
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2 posted 2006-08-09 07:47 AM


Yea...lay down on the ground...Toe will help ya "capture that moment".......
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2006-08-09 08:22 AM


but Larry I had to chase down those clouds...they kept moving and my property is filled with trees...and I did get dizzy



Toe..I am sure you would have

for the thoughts

M

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4 posted 2006-08-10 11:54 AM


I bet you did have a hard time capturing that picture.
LOL at Toerags reply.

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5 posted 2006-08-10 12:03 PM


I'd almost have paid to see that

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2006-08-10 01:55 PM


M ~ National Geographic would be proud of you for that STUNNING photo! ~ Perhaps you could make a buck or two! lol Seriously amazing!

Kudos for that out-standing photographic capture! ~ and the words that accompanied it weren't half bad either!

Loving Light,
Linda

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7 posted 2006-08-12 01:51 AM


A delightful take!!

Feels like dancing in whirls already....

enjoyed your lightening poetry

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2006-08-13 07:06 AM


Those clouds were so beautiful ... I couldn't resist taking their picture.
thank you for your responses
M

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