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CastleGuard
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0 posted 2006-08-08 03:04 PM




Oh, Temptation, how swift you court Desire!
So devious your ploy to snare a heart
Into the net of your delicious fire —
So deftly will you aim the honeyed dart!
But ‘tis not the Laws nor lover’s soured song
Which will bar the gate to your garden sweet -
But the whispers of the Right and Wrong
In deepest chambers of the heart’s retreat.
So, wretched Temptation, cease thy futile quest
And seek another victim to thy spells —
For those but probing instruments to test
The mind if false desire within dwells:
But should the mind such hidden stain unveil,
Then let the heart an unfeigned judge prevail.


CG

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1 posted 2006-08-08 03:08 PM


this was.....wow.....

there isn't a way to put it put it was brilliant

Lady Ollyne
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2 posted 2006-08-08 03:42 PM


'Tis nice to have mine eyes view words of Thee...

LadyO

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2006-08-08 03:45 PM


Welcome back, CG

"So, wretched Temptation, cease thy futile quest
And seek another victim to thy spells —"

~ Lead thee not into temptation!

Stand strong, Sir Knight!

Loving Light,
EA

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