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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2006-08-08 01:46 PM



did you ever believe how serious it could be

              to be delirious with glee

but now your furious with me

           so i'm curious ; will i ever flee

into one of your conversations again?

you have to believe me ; my only mystery was to see

                        us as friends

but i have to admit the way i went about it put an end

to your desire to fill my Seagram's Gin

                         with "n"ice



                                                       love,

                                                       howard



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Beau de L'air
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since 2006-08-03
Posts 105
Middlesex, England
1 posted 2006-08-08 01:48 PM


It's good.  It's clever too.  These things don't always go together.  Good for you!
howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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2 posted 2006-08-08 01:51 PM


thanks Beau de l'air
Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08
Posts 337
East Coast
3 posted 2006-08-08 05:09 PM


gave me a ~smile~ thanks

I read your poems as if they are very personal letters to "someone"
( sorry..I forgot who I was today...meant to be nakdthoughts )
M

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