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Not Metered Much
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Not Metered Much It is so hard to stay positive when "uncontrollable" exists in how we live. Each step "never known for sure" hard to contemplate, to know when/what to give. What you want is not always available, hides behind the emptiness of a "someday" word. But difficulties come through loud and clear always, they seep penetrating, to be heard. Life and death, and uncertainties deceptions to taint the scene. Judgements over-rated just because you've faked that self-esteem. There's unevenness in my rhyming for the world appears the same. Doesn't really matter since "nakdthoughts" is just a name. For those who've lost and those who've gained despite the odds, it's done. And no one feels it more than I, absorbing all, this one. M ((hugs for you)) "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
It is so hard to stay positive when "uncontrollable" exists in how we live. Each step "never known for sure" hard to contemplate, to know when/what to give. heartfelt poem here's something to give you a smile Have you ever wondered why A, B, C, D, DD, E and F are the letters used to define bra sizes? If you have wondered why, but couldn't figure out what the letters stood for, it's about time you became informed! {A} - Almost Boobs... {B} - Barely there. {C} - Can't Complain! {D} - Damn! {DD} - Double damn! {E} - Enormous! {F} - Fake.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Like eveyone else who reads this dose of reality, I felt every word. ((hugs)) 4 U 2 Loving Light, Linda  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lee, you gave me a smile  and Linda, another poet friend has just lost his Mother unexpectedly...I just have had and shared so much sorrow and negativity this past year..that it seems no matter how much I try to move forward in feelings and thoughts and deeds... the sad overwhelms the happy that is trying its best to have some staying power...if you know what I mean. M |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh M, I especially like the last stanza of this one. It says it all, really. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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