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pecan tree (charcoal man and his lady)

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The Lady
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shadow hair lady
under pecan tree
telling silver beads  
flowing water
through half moon fingers
  
long shade on white skirt  
brown fingers reaching  
she eyes
wraps arms around his neck  
he lifts her  
strokes damp cheek  
boozy boozay  
la t’latte  
a bad bobo?
charcoal man asks  

lady nods  
bahbin  
red lip bent to
the threat of a smile  
row of white milk teeth
bared    

charcoal man sets her down    
slips off her princess shoes  
smoothes cotton skimpy
walks away  

lady gets up
barefoot

at noonday Papa
looks for his doucette    
under the pecan tree
  
gone
© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!


1 posted 08-08-2006 12:52 AM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

Hmmm ...
I feel like I am eavesdropping.
Maybe I am.
If so, it's too late
I am addicted!
The Lady
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eavesdrop on aziza...
I'm addicted too

I was afraid she would
go back to him
smile
aziza
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Time will tell what the lady will do, aye?
I just know that I am the voyeur peeking in on them.
passing shadows
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whoa! this is outstanding!
Sunshine
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A few years back I did a storyline, similar to yours...

I'm loving this...

all the fun and very little work on my part!  

Write on!

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it is a pleasure
to watch her
get muddy
on purpose

enjoyed it lady one
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Oh, this is warm and intimate.  I like it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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ahhh aziza… it does all lie in
the lady’s hands, doesn’t it?

thank you Dixie

thank you for everything Karilea
I love this couple
very little work on my part too
all play

she may get muddier yet
Stranger
she loves that man to distraction
poor thing…

thank you Nan
1slick_lady
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damndamndamn

kate i am such a fan of yours
The Lady
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laughing

thank you so much Helen
I am a fan of yours too
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11 posted 03-27-2011 12:37 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

See, I knew she wouldn't keep those princess shoes long ~

I love this story.

A
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