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Edward Grim
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since 2005-12-18
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Greenville, South Carolina

0 posted 2006-08-07 11:05 AM


Lovin on El Chupacabra


I feel,
therefore I is to be.
I bleed,
so far I’m still swimming.

Passive aggressiveness,
arrested,
false
and permanent…
I bleed
faux feelers,
therefore I is to be.

Mirror, mirror,
I know you too
so quit with the
lookers
I’m in love with something
more real…

I'm not smart, I'm just a tricky dumb person.

© Copyright 2006 Edward Grant - All Rights Reserved
XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
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Virginia
1 posted 2006-08-07 02:06 PM


Taste like goat.   ::smiles::    enjoyed
seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan
2 posted 2006-08-07 02:54 PM


The last line hooked me. You've got style, my friend.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2006-08-07 09:16 PM


lol
and 'no' complaints, eh?
enjoyed 11 complaints
the night beautiful tune
mellow mellow

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
4 posted 2006-08-07 11:57 PM


Well, you already know I am a fan.  It's because of poetry like this that I am.

aziza

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