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Decaflame
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0 posted 2006-08-07 08:51 AM



A Passing

I turned into
the noble sounds and scent
upon a southern wind

and found you;

you brought the sun
to build black clouds

encouraged rain to drop
a bow
then later, flung the moon
into my eyes…

and in whirled wind fashion
the sunrise arose
upon olive limbs

when August became
just another month.


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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-08-07 08:58 AM


"encouraged rain to drop
a bow
then later, flung the moon
into my eyes…"

WOW!!  Deca Deca Deca!!
You have been away far too long!!
Please say you will stay longer this time..?
AND I love this piece!
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2006-08-07 09:12 AM


love it

M

Martie
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California
3 posted 2006-08-07 09:55 AM


Deca....and a leaf can be blown about with such, that it will never be the same.  
garysgirl
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4 posted 2006-08-07 10:53 AM


Beautiful writing.
Hugs,
Ethel

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
5 posted 2006-08-07 02:25 PM


august is lucky it seems ms deca
enjoyed this view

seraphin
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Michigan
6 posted 2006-08-07 02:50 PM


This is lovely-wow! x2
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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2006-08-07 02:51 PM


infuriating
you found that which was not lost
cumulonimbus

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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