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FNG
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0 posted 2006-08-07 08:31 AM


Oh so little they appear.
Genuine laughs and gestures adheres,
to their innately naviety.

Oh so little they appear
In bulks and giants,
their love conquers,
the sadness in life,
disappointments and fear.

Oh so little they appear.
Playing tugs and wars,
with super-hero gears.

Fighting greys and shadows,
Amidst the wallows
of other older fellows.

Oh so little they appear.
Like little Precious gems and stones.


Sometimes its not easy to spot gems. Im fortunate to be surounded by lots of these bundle of joys.

© Copyright 2006 Danielle Tan - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-08-07 09:31 AM


FNG~
So totally precious indeed !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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2 posted 2006-08-07 09:34 AM


Indeed precious gems!
Just as this write is!
Hugs~

LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-08-07 09:52 AM


me to, there are many gems in the world...to off set the not so nice gems....

lovely poem

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4 posted 2006-08-07 11:22 AM


We should learn from the little ones who live in the 'now' void of yesterdays mistakes and tomorrows unknown encumberances.  Little ones are quick to forgive and unafraid to love.  

This writing is delight.

    Rae

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5 posted 2006-08-07 12:09 PM


This is such a sweet poem. I, too, am
surrounded by these gems.
Hugs,
Ethel

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6 posted 2006-08-07 03:23 PM


phew a thought provoker, i got a message about our children these great gifts from G-D, who are on loan to us, as our lives are too are on loan.
FNG
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7 posted 2006-08-08 01:01 AM


Dear all,

Thanks for reading and sharing my sentiments

sandgrain - indeed, they are quick to forgive and forget.

LeeJ - YES! they offset unhappiness in life  

garygirl - glad you are having them around to make your life happier!  

artexeres - i like how you put it. they are on loan to us. hope i will not take them for granted

enchantress - Thanks for your kind words.

Marge - It's always nice to see your poetry. they inspires me

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