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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-08-07 07:08 AM



back again to the house of glass
the mountain of shimmer
where the mirrors have ripples
on the watery of their complexion

creole candy was spilled milk
just momentary chin dribble residue
from the hungry of needles
and their electric undulations

that made the long shirts fray
buttonless as trees without leaves
on chairs too close together
rubbing arms just for the wood sounds

and not the sweet smell of varnish
when it gets hot enough to be wax
on some proper imperfection
a broken nail under scrutiny

waiting for a fatherless approval
_____________

daark

scribblenote: transitions between glass and sunset at the private showing of amber and jade at the hartford mansion in brentwood

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-08-07 07:16 AM



Ok, so I get a vision
of a wedding...and perhaps
not so much bliss...

but that's what I see,
out there on that shimmery
horizon...



Good monday, sir...


inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2006-08-07 07:27 AM


where the mirrors have ripples
on the watery of their complexion

mirrors with nipples
i like that too

o my stars in heaven
you do have a way

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2006-08-07 08:26 AM


ms sun, no wedding, just buildings along the 405 and down the beverly, thanks

__________

ms inky, thanks for busting me with that image, you are a treat babe

Decaflame
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4 posted 2006-08-07 08:27 AM


Morning, D...

smiling at the all of this...


Martie
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5 posted 2006-08-07 09:57 AM


DS....Can I borrow your glasses?  
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2006-08-07 10:09 AM


thanks ms deca

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ms martie, thanks little neighbor, prescription windshield?  grin

seraphin
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7 posted 2006-08-07 02:57 PM


I do so love getting lost in your words. I just worry, I won't find my way back.
Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2006-08-07 02:59 PM


ms sera..
not to worry..there is a crazy man there with a blind seeing eye gator that will lead you very slowly back..to confusion..thanks for the eyes ms

seraphin
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9 posted 2006-08-07 03:02 PM


Dark! That would make it "Gator-aid"! ha!!
Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2006-08-07 03:36 PM


ms sera..ok..now I just got busted for laughing out loud in the library..
The Lady
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11 posted 2006-08-08 12:40 PM




ripples...nipples

gatorade and all
of the above

I've had a good laugh

and I think it is possible
to get lost here forever
seraphin...

"creole candy was spilled milk
just momentary chin dribble residue'

happens to even the most proper of us
Stranger

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2006-08-08 07:26 AM


lady one, sippin the creole sauce
does make one speak in other tongues
thanks for the eyes ms

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