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meetmyworld
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since 2006-08-07
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0 posted 2006-08-07 02:52 AM



Filled with the fear of coming to grips
And knowing that your gone
Remembering the time we had
And the night you said so long
The instant my heart stopped
When I heard of the news
That you just might not make it
And I kneeled in the pews
Helpless in that lobby
Wondering what to do
The only thought within my head
Was wanting to be with you
To talk to you that day
Only a few hours before
And the sight of your mom
In that hospital door
Nobody really knew
How I really felt about you
Until I stood there hugging your mom
As she told me the news
She said I was the last one
You had talked to that day
The day you met an awesome God
That day you went away
And as I sat in the church
Just a few days after
I realized all you’ve done
Was start another chapter
So many times ive wanted
To come and visit you
To talk to you once again
And tell you that I love you
Youll always be remembered
For makin people smile
And you memory will be in my heart
For forever and a while


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1 posted 2006-08-07 08:41 AM



WELCOME to our world of poetic friendships~

This is quite the poignant penning~

Enjoy your stay with us~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Enchantress
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2 posted 2006-08-07 08:53 AM


Welcome to Passions!
Very well done entrance post.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

Decaflame
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3 posted 2006-08-07 08:56 AM



Welcome to Passions!


nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2006-08-07 09:15 AM


a loving, touching write...
welcome
M

ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
5 posted 2006-08-09 06:16 PM


A welcoming gift of words love is ....

      .... look forward to more as well.

  Ct

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