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Ode To A Mate
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Ode To A Mate |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia 
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Here I go again It happens all too often, This time He’s really blown it, My mates completely lost it. Another mistake has ruined him For now he is all alone. Tired, sad and lifeless His body is as hard as stone I have my chance to rule the world And never be afraid. To become a gorgeous princess To make my parents be proud of whom I am & to live a long, long journey we all proudly call our life. As I lay your sparkling heart down for internal rest, Remember the tall, bright girl who claimed you the very best She will memorise your very smile, Cry away your pain Fight away your bad dreams Protect your sorry soul For you had made one big mistake that had finally taken its toll ~~~~~Rest in Peace, My Friend~~~~~ Drugs may be a comfort but the outcome is heartbreaking…….. |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
memories may not always be sweet but they certainly can be poetic a poet who cares |
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artexeres Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 156south africa |
Today, is the appointed period of all your actions, which have been performed by you, for the sake of growth and knowledge, give way not to grief but put on calmness, and so let your greatness shine forth. Well done on the write, on every thing, wisdom, is shown to always be right. |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Thankyou both for your lovely replys it is so amazing to see everyones views on what i write especially for a young girl. And with that i will make the best of who i am and what i write. Thanks Again. |
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