»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #38
»
crossed eye pirate
| Open Poetry #38 |
|
crossed eye pirate |
|
|
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
|
crossed eye pirate sees things both ways covered with fur of a thousand tiny rabbits to protect soft feelings held tightly in belly on long striders he approaches our lady of white sighs she lies quietly bound hand and foot in purple and pink silk dreams sword drawn he makes the first cut waits as ruby wells up wipes his hands on rabbit fur takes his prize no yo ho ho no dead man’s chest simply a silent lady heart in the hands of a pirate crosslights playing on her empty breast |
||
| © Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I like. Lots, I do. |
||
|
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you aziza smile |
||
|
FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
WWooooo...mystique.  |
||
|
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
no yo ho ho no dead man’s chest simply a silent lady heart in the hands of a pirate crosslights playing on her empty breast why are we always attracted to the bad boys? hehe...beautiful poetry Lady |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hey Lady....They are so attractive, aren't they? I think there is a heart under the scars of bravado. Love the way of your words.  |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady There is a little pirate in all of us.  |
||
|
Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Quite an enjoyable read, m'Lady. |
||
garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello Lady! This is quite mysterious. And, yes, ladies do like the bad boys! Well, kinda bad.  Hugs, Ethel |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
behind the raybanz would his eyes be crossed or just winking wickedly enjoyed this tour of wickedry lady one |
||
|
seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
I read this last night, and was at a total loss for words. Sooo, I read it again today, and again, and again. All I know is this is impressive. You painted it so very vividly. |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Intriguing write! ~ That's no way to treat a Lady! ~ Unless the lady actually enjoys it!  Loving Light, Linda |
||
|
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thanks for the Wooooo FNG thank you LeeJ I wish I knew what it is with the bad boys not that I’d give ‘em up gosh Martie I hope there’s something under there thank you thank you Sir Pirate Sy I believe you thank you, Decaflame “kinda bad” is right Ethel thank you not really crossed or winking Stranger… just always looking elsewhere you know? Seraphin, thank you so much thank you Linda I don’t really know this lady all that well yet |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
