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seraphin
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0 posted 2006-08-06 12:17 PM


A lone moth landed on my monitor screen
And walked knowingly across the words
I wondered how much verse it had seen
And that thought seemed totally absurd.
So I asked this lone moth, if it liked poetry,
Better to read, or better to write.
And the moth said to me,
In pure moth-en-eze
I am just so fond of the light!


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aziza
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1 posted 2006-08-06 02:01 AM


:: Smiles ::

This is whimsical and creative
and I love it.

themute
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2 posted 2006-08-06 02:07 AM


too bad he didnt read the words

I am the two-toed wanderer

poettothecars
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3 posted 2006-08-06 06:34 AM


This poem makes a person think, and that is to me what poetry is all about. Even if that was a smart moth

a poet who cares

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-08-06 11:39 PM



delightful, seraphin

TinaTrivett
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5 posted 2006-08-07 10:48 PM


I love it!
Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2006-08-07 10:57 PM



wondering which writes mothy favored

artexeres
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7 posted 2006-08-08 12:24 PM


to be fond of the light, is a great trait,except if you are a moth, lol. this is a lovely poece that gives thought to meaning thank you.
Earth Angel
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8 posted 2006-08-08 10:24 AM


Sheer delight, Seraphin!

~ Smart moth! Smarter poet!

Loving Light,
EA

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