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artexeres
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since 2006-08-01
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0 posted 2006-08-05 05:52 PM



Were we just the spare bricks
to be thrown on to a lot?
Perhaps some of our parents
where the ones who chose and forgot
Is there nothing of
truth

to be found for those searching everywhere?
Little loving words telling you
how much they want you and they care
All this parental love
that
they just don’t know how to share

And when it is their life
that is put before the looking glass
You get a clear reflection
and
it shows that they had no class
Their actions were
shallow weak and so very crass
Yet you were once deluded
that you were the loosing trash

Now with the truth deep instilled
You no longer have an excuse
to be a weakling without a will
please tell me whats the use

There is time for you
to rise and to reach your destiny still
A future
no longer bleak now a golden wanton thrill

The moral decadence
of someone does not reflect you
To yourself learn your value
and
always be honest and true

Don’t believe their lies as
more
evil they choose to want to spew
Know deep inside
what lives
yes the truth resides in you.

With a soul that’s encased
with metal
you have sussed the lies of the past
You have been gifted
to see through
all of their lying masks
You have carried upon your soul the burnt scars and the marks
As you tried to find
the meaning
as you tried to find life’s spark

Now is the time to depart where falseness
lives and where it larks
It is not only in the
ocean that you find these killer sharks
Now the only question that remains
is do you just follow suit?
Know the seeds that you sow
well you get to eat the fruit
Rather like the pipe piper
follow
knowledge’s loving fluit
As you choose to live
a life
not covered in a hateful soot
This type of ignorant love
is what you should give the boot


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1 posted 2006-08-05 08:32 PM


quote:
With a soul that’s encased
with metal
you have sussed the lies of the past
You have been gifted
to see through
all of their lying masks
You have carried upon your soul the burnt scars and the marks
As you tried to find
the meaning
as you tried to find life’s spark

BRAVO! and welcome. This is a passionate piece of writing, filled with much positive affirmation material...enough to keep you on a pathway of truth. Thank you for sharing these thoughts.

artexeres
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since 2006-08-01
Posts 156
south africa
2 posted 2006-08-05 08:57 PM


wow, thanks for the comment and taking the time to read.
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