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artexeres
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since 2006-08-01
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south africa

0 posted 2006-08-05 02:59 PM



Remember, that you see things
only
from your own stand point of view
What some one else is thinking
we really
don’t have a clue
As we don’t know how their mind work
like it or not
that is true
Yet we act as though we can read minds
and
read them we sure do
No wonder we are argumentative
and feel
that life is set against you
Appertaining to wisdom
is something
we really ought to do
Desperate thinking
presumptuous actions
these leave us feeling
down and blue
Remember that we see
things
only from our own stand point of view

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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
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1 posted 2006-08-05 04:53 PM


Looks great to me.   ::smiles::  
Wonderful write !    :: bows ::

artexeres
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since 2006-08-01
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2 posted 2006-08-05 05:27 PM


thank you for a very nice comment
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