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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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I Know love without reason winter out of season a heart broken words left unspoken flight on broken wings promises with strings upside down inside out always feeling doubt keeping a lip stiff learned to live with if ridden with the pain holding tears between the rain hid fear in throat choke watched dreams rise in smoke held words when I should speak acted strong when I was weak pretended I did not bleed all in the name of need just some words cut from |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
i know love without answers and seasons without sunshine. also life without structures and answers without reason. this is a good concept that i might use some time. Tf i could hug you. I am the two-toed wanderer |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
i know love without answers and seasons without sunshine. also life without structures and answers without reason. this is a good concept that i might use some time. if i could hug you. I am the two-toed wanderer |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
you can have the concept i will take the hug |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
This is done so very well. The emotion imbedded in the lines could only be real, and for that I offer understanding. For the words themselves, I offer applause. You did this really well. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"holding tears between the rain" what a gem this line is nicely done Helen enjoyed it very much |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
What a way with expression you have, I don't comment much, but this demanded it!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A most excellent write Helen... very much enjoyed. Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
These are the things that make us realize how hard it is to hold on to the other side, but also, they are the things that make us realize what the other side has in store... Nice write. Kristabell "Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life." |
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