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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2006-08-05 04:14 AM


My Latest Lova
A guy of many mysteries
A heart bigger than his head,
A smile full of warmth,
Gives life its intent

Tall, smart and sassy
Always nicely dressed
He messes with my heart,
While he Sweeps me off my feet.

He reckons that I’m hot
And deep down I believe him
Although I know I am not

I wish he was right here with me,
There to hold my hand
To keep my body warm
To hold me while I sleep

God knows I love him
Although he wonders why
For I am in love with a very simple guy


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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2006-08-05 04:34 AM


He reckons that I’m hot
And deep down I believe him
Although I know I am not

How we see ourselves is much like a poem
We see the inside
all that makes up the entire part of me
And others see the beauty that shines

Interesting, huh.

FNG
Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477

2 posted 2006-08-07 06:18 AM


hmm, makes me wonder. HOw do you know it's love? I can't tell after i  meet the end road of the realtionship. just a passing thought. Your poem stirs...
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