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RevengeIsMine
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Am I ever lonely or is it in my head,
Does the sun rotate or is it really dead.
Is the moon really made of cheese just like the TV said?

I think I live a life of dreams, insanity and made up lies,
It takes a lot to make my bed to smile or to laugh
And today is just another day where my emotion dies too fast.
© Copyright 2006 A Typical Aussie Chick - All Rights Reserved
perfect stranger
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1 posted 08-06-2006 01:50 PM       View Profile for perfect stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for perfect stranger

love this, love all your poems,my son thought the moon was made of cheese until he was 8 he always said he would like to go to the moon,when his daughter was born he wanted to call her moon but her mother said no,she was called Brooke as in a small stream of water,sun moon stars and water,just having a laugh to myself about my son thinking the moon was made of cheese, love the poem.

Kristabell
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2 posted 08-06-2006 09:59 PM       View Profile for Kristabell   Email Kristabell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kristabell

It seems as if you put some lasting emotion into this, you know? Nice write.

Kristabell

"Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life."

RevengeIsMine
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3 posted 08-08-2006 02:28 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Thankyou both very much for your comments.

I am 16 now and 10 years ago i remember watching a bananas and pyjamas episode about the moon being made of cheese and then when my mum told me it wasnt i remember crying for hours in my room, Such devestation.
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4 posted 12-17-2008 08:56 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

"Am I ever lonely or is it in my head,
Does the sun rotate or is it really dead."

I really liked this
 
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