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Larry C
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Acceptance
By Larry Chadwick


If I penned my heart and shared it with you,
I have complete confidence youd know what to do.
If I voiced my feelings in expressions meant as a gift,
I trust youd receive it as a meaningful lift.

If I touched you tenderly as I like to do,
Id accept your response as a gift from you.
If I sit and gaze longingly into your eyes,
Id see your return gaze as a meaningful prize.

If all that I offer is returned in kind,
Id be totally confident your heart is mine.

August 4, 2006





If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.
© Copyright 2006 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
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And did you share it with
that special one?



It's good to see you again...

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You speak the truth Larry. (-:
I liked how it flowed smoothly. Lovely description of acceptance.

~Jill
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Larry C
Makes sense to me. Enjoyed
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Nice poem.
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Mourning Dove
When the dove died
She fell by our pool.
I saw blue
Among pearl-brown feathers

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and such a sweet heart it is
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Sigh, so good to read your heart-thoughts again. How could anyone say no to this plea?
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Larry, this is just so sweet and beautiful....

sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

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You are such a sweetheart, Larry.
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You may remain confident, sir.

Very tender, indeed.
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If.... such a mighty word. Love it, martyjo
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Karilea,
Nope, I wrote it at work after five on my way out the door and I'm not online at home. And thank you.

Jill,
I'm pleased you liked it. Thanks.

Sy,
That's a relief! And thank you.

SusieQ,
Thanks kindly. And welcome to Passions.

Susan,
Thank you for sharing and welcome to Passions. Hope you like it half as much as I do.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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Helen,
How kind of you.

Kacy,
Aw... you are so sweet.


Thanks Sky and so are you.

Sue,
Thank you and I pray all is well with you.

seraphin,
Well you are generous and thank you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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Martyjo!
Indeed and you are incredibly kind.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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Hi Larry

Love so tender is a keeper for the heart.  Good to see you!  
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Martie,
Thank you dear lady. Someday I'll be here more routinely. Until then, my apologies for missing so much of your knew found wisdom.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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Larry...such a lovely write..I do hope you at least print them out to share at home

hope your summer is going well


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You know this one turned my heart to putty, right? *S*

As I told Seymour on a poem titled the same... for me, there was birth... and then there was life... the latter beginning with the miracle of acceptance. *S*

Beautiful write! *S*
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well, now I'm utterly vexed, thank you very much...

this was absolute beauty...thank you for sharing.
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Larry, this is so sweet and loving.
Thanks for sharing your heart.
hugs,


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Sweetness becomes you.

A welcome read.
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M,
Thank you. I brought home a laptop and did the wireless thing and shared the write with Nancy Lee. My summer has had it's bumps but I'm still ticking. Likewise I hope you have had a pleasant summer as well.

Ruthie,
Thank you so much. I can't imagine a better way to start life than with acceptance. How lovely to see you here.

LeeJ,
I'm not sure I've ever seen you vexed before. And thank you for your kindness.

Ethel,
Thank you kind friend. I pray all is well with you!

Catrina,
How generous of you. And it is nice to see you here. Peace.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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Very lovely.  
I hope you shared this with that special person.

aziza
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That poem was cute. Thanks for posting this poem...inspiring me to share my feelings opennly. LOL. Great job.

Much luv,
Rissa*
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