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Level Me

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EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever


0 posted 08-04-2006 04:15 PM       View Profile for EagleScorpion   Email EagleScorpion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for EagleScorpion

you humble me, you.
you are a diamond in the rough
an animal.
you bear the exquisitely painful burden of greatness
the wonder
that is you
inspires people
perhaps you dont know the possibilities that lay before you
maybe you dont realize how fabulous you really are
you probably cant even fathom the things you can do for this world while you are here
just by being you
the way you carry yourself, the way you live
the way you breathe, the way you laugh and smile
these things end wars and save lives
and start revolutions
your spirit is mighty
you level me, you do.
i am so honored to have met you
so honored to have had the privelege
of being in the presence
of one of the great souls of the universe
the stories about you are known on many worlds
they speak highly of you
around campfires and dinner tables
your legend has been written and you dont even know it yet
your magic is absolute artistry
weaved by eternal hands
your heart, a lifesaving beacon
darling,
i'd ride with you anyday
© Copyright 2006 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
Kristabell
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1 posted 08-04-2006 05:16 PM       View Profile for Kristabell   Email Kristabell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kristabell

Beautiful wording. you are right, those are the things that "stop wars" and "save lives."

Kristabell

"Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life."

passing shadows
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2 posted 08-04-2006 05:57 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

this made me smile
Ceinwyn
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3 posted 08-04-2006 07:14 PM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ceinwyn

that was so beautiful...whomever this is for is quite special...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

EagleScorpion
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4 posted 10-27-2006 03:44 PM       View Profile for EagleScorpion   Email EagleScorpion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleScorpion

it was for many people, not just one
 
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