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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2006-08-04 08:37 AM


oh, luminous swan
dreamily practicing memories
         of summer
in a pond
   somewhere on the shore of winds

...jasmine infused

phoenix rising

I am merely an unopened bud

where soul filled flutes play sun rise

silky explorer winds, timeless

speaking an emerald path of

       "come hither"

remember?

         when I still needed you?

you,

     an ongoing pilgrimage

shaman’s vision

melodic hugeness

             and tireless ladder

found within human tuning systems

deepest states

             morning praise

unite themes of ancient text

             channels passions

remarkable levity

             in the highlands
of sea birds

percussion, water sounds

             atmospheric messages
fusion
dripping
dripping
dripping
             inside books of sacred chant

receiving
              yet untold stories
of echoes
             reflecting earth shadows

against the moon

where human mind
             dawns diamonds

and scented candles swoon

you

you

expand
             awareness

our immense silence

              where sky turns

to vast infinity

            & mysteries of dreamtimes

only music
             intimate

       where ritual

fuses harmonic waves

             wishing

mystic oceans

             stretching souls

that never fade

you are here in the moment

taking our minds

              on a walk of

deep compassion

              with autumn colored moments

in the mountains

             of sensuous essence

you gave
            moonstones
to  
   small
         emerald
                  eyes

we become rain tigers...

swelling in the heart of nature....


© Copyright 2006 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2006-08-04 08:44 AM


LeeJ
Well that is a bouquet any man would relish.
Top of the morning to ya sweety.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2006-08-04 09:24 AM


I literally got all tingly as you swept me away on a magical carpet ride of love. It is so apparent that you knew/know whereof you speak. Totally engaging!

Smiling here
Linda

divine chaos
Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon
3 posted 2006-08-04 09:56 AM


*blinks*
oh LeeJ .. wow!
absolutely breathtaking

you are so good for my mind

so bad for my work
*grins and reluctantly returns to work
to listen to the doctors babbling*

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2006-08-04 10:12 AM


Thank you, LeeJ, for yet another wonderful read. You take me where I never think to go and it certainly is an "amazing" experience.
Interloper
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
5 posted 2006-08-04 04:15 PM


The waves just carried me on to the end

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2006-08-04 05:08 PM


damn woman! Write on!!
Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
Posts 678
Portland, OR
7 posted 2006-08-04 06:31 PM


This is beautiful. Thank you for the wonderful write.

Kristabell

"Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life."

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
8 posted 2006-08-05 12:33 PM




it was the
"silky explorer winds"
that carried me away

beautiful

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
9 posted 2006-08-05 05:36 AM


LeeJ, this is among my favorite all time poems and I'm saving it!  Most excellent!  *hugs*....jo
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