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poettothecars
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0 posted 2006-08-04 07:28 AM


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October Love

04 August 2006


Was there ever
October love
under a July moon

Of days in June
and August to quest
Could love be in you
to be one above the rest

Time taken
patience strained
Another day
your heart obtained

This place where
the world smiles back
For this was love,
finally kindled

A feeling of just wanting
to love and be loved
If only for her, in being
what love could be


“Who can find a virtuous woman? for her price is far
above rubies. The heart of her husband doth safely
trust in her, so that he shall have no need of spoil.
She will do him good and not evil all the days of her life.”
Proverbs 31: 10-12 KJV


© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

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© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-08-04 01:13 PM


very nice new pic!

enjoyed this poem very much.


poettothecars
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2 posted 2006-08-04 04:33 PM


It is nice to see the SEA again
an ocean of which to dream
Like an occasion of hope
this streaming upon beauty to view

As if tomorrow,
will make all yesterday's good
And today will being spring time
to that in birth of amour

Some call it love
others spirit to understanding
Those waters we spread in His name
our God in Christ to standard given

Just to see the sea
and watch upon each ocean wave
For this was tomorrow
those waters of forgiveness to drink

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SusieQ
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3 posted 2006-08-05 12:50 PM


Beautiful.
poettothecars
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4 posted 2006-08-05 01:49 AM


Thank you for your kind comment

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5 posted 2006-08-05 09:05 AM


awwww...


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