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droppinginsideout Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 54TENN |
C'mon now, just regret forgetting it, then just forget you're regretting it. look ahead, i know there's a lot of darkness. but what we have now, with that first of cries, is the light that cuts the darkness. look ahead, what bonds us forever we'll help grow to more than a million of our hopes. dreams will come true, and best of all... you can be you. i cant thank you enough, for living to live. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very comforting I like it welcome to Passions! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
i cant thank you enough, for living to live. AMEN! Welcome to Passions!!!! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
look ahead, what bonds us forever we'll help grow to more than a million of our hopes. I want you to grow more than a million of your hopes -- I like your work. aziza |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dear poet... when I first read this poem this morning, it had a friction of light from the east... and when I read this poem tonight, it had the rainbow of the light from the west, and a totally NEW concept of meaning.... which is to say... don't always take a first writing at first glance.... I'm so glad I came back to this, and so very glad to Welcome you to Passions! Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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droppinginsideout Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 54TENN |
thank you for your words. keep it coming with the criticism, good or bad. Glad to be apart of Piptalk! |
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