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SusieQ
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since 2006-08-01
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Michigan, USA

0 posted 2006-08-04 01:43 AM



Shadows move into view
Hungry for daylight and sunbeams
Weary of thinking
He is gone


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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2006-08-04 02:25 AM


Beautiful in its stark message.

It hits home.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2006-08-04 07:46 AM


single note snapshot song
but blink your eyes
for another new day
brings another song

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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3 posted 2006-08-04 04:14 PM



Sad work indeed
Susie

[This message has been edited by The Lady (08-05-2006 12:35 AM).]

SusieQ
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since 2006-08-01
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Michigan, USA
4 posted 2006-08-05 12:37 PM



Thank you very much but I don't think I will sing very soon.

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