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The Gift
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The Gift |
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Bobomo Junior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 35 |
She floats thru life, a flowery breeze A gentle wind that dances with trees Barefoot in the grass, the fields all sway She’s the perfect sunrise, the perfect day Her laughter melodic, the sweetest song It tickles the ears and makes us strong Eyes like gems, green and blue A Shimmering bright, amazing hue The touch of her skin, silky and soft Raises our spirits to the highest loft If she kisses your cheek but once in your life The mere memory of it can end your strife Everyone’s happy whenever she’s near The embodiment of everything we all hold dear Spinning and dancing, thru our hearts Weaving her spells, the ancient arts For she is a Dragon, majestic and proud Encasing the sky in a rainbow shroud She walks as a woman, but don’t be fooled The breath of the dragon has not been cooled With passion she breathes not fire but love A gift to us all from the heavens above |
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Billy_tha_Kidd Junior Member
since 2006-07-17
Posts 27Indiana USA |
Pretty good! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 wonderful description!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, yes...there she is... I see her in the sun's heat a reddish gold flame of brilliant light... she is indeed embodied with the gift... and granted it, to you. Well done, and Welcome to Passions! |
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SusieQ Junior Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 40Michigan, USA |
Very pretty poem. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lyrical, ethereal ~ and magical!  Delightful first post! Hi! Welcome to pipTalk. Giving you a warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, yes, lovely write! Welcome to Passions! |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Very nicely done! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A gift from you to us. Thanx |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Aww, this is wonderful! Sounds like a true gem. Nice write. Kristabell "Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life." |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Welcome to Pip. This was a wonderful write. Much enjoyed Hugs Kimberly |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to passions. Enjoyed your poem. TD |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Hi, I think you did a good job in rhyming. One thing i might have to brush up on. enjoyed. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
There was real meaning in this for me. Came back to read it again. Thanks for posting this! Deserving of more time. |
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