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A Love Without Good-byes

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AlexanderPoetry
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0 posted 08-03-2006 03:36 PM       View Profile for AlexanderPoetry   Email AlexanderPoetry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AlexanderPoetry


  A Love Without Good-byes

  by  Alexander


A lifetime filled with cheating hearts, all echo from my past.
The love so true's and I love you's, each one was meant to last.
So fine this line of sharing, built with honesty and trust.
Each vow now left inside my head, to slowly gather dust.

I struggle to tomorrow, searching hope, yet walking blind.
While broken dreams and silent screams play re-runs in my mind.
I try to shake each past mistake, and meet what lies ahead.
While hearing cold reminders of these promises once said.

It's hard to feel whats wrong from real when shadows dim the light.
I close my eyes and dream a dream of heaven every night.
Is all I know, this history I hold, a guiding hand ?
These scars I show, a lesson that I yet don't understand.

Another day awaits me, in this life I call my own.
A cruel delay frustrates me, as I face this world alone.
Let words once said and tears long shed, rest peaceful in this heart,
I know the pain of love in vain will always play its part.

Each night I wait for slumber, so that once again I steal,
A moments bliss with lovers lost, I know cannot be real.
With open arms I welcome such new dreams that may arise,
I only pray to find one day, a love... without good-byes.
          

copyright:Alexander:March:2006.

© Copyright 2006 AlexanderPoetry - All Rights Reserved
divine chaos
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1 posted 08-03-2006 03:55 PM       View Profile for divine chaos   Email divine chaos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for divine chaos

this is just so touching
and sad and beautiful
I relate to it well

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

Earth Angel
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2 posted 08-03-2006 04:02 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Anyone who can write like that is deserving of a love with no good-byes.

Beautifully and lyrically penned.

Loving Light,
EA
Billy_tha_Kidd
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3 posted 08-03-2006 06:19 PM       View Profile for Billy_tha_Kidd   Email Billy_tha_Kidd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Billy_tha_Kidd

agrees with Earth Angel
elisalie16
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4 posted 08-03-2006 10:32 PM       View Profile for elisalie16   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elisalie16

i agree with all of the afore comments. beautiful, sad, but very touching.
AlexanderPoetry
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5 posted 11-11-2010 03:05 AM       View Profile for AlexanderPoetry   Email AlexanderPoetry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AlexanderPoetry

For anyone who cares to view, a video has now been produced for this poem.  It can be viewed at the URL below..
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qNRO2Ox-rzU

yours,

Alexander.
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