My children made a man out of me

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Open Poetry #38

My children made a man out of me

artexeres
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since 2006-08-01

Posts 156
south africa

0 posted 2006-08-03 12:49 PM

To have been a part from the very start
My children you conquered my heart
I love what you mean to me
You are my totalvictory

A boy and a girl a pigeon pair
Such beauty and minds so frailly fair
Always know that I more than just care
I would never judge you, I would not dare
Go and live your lives and claim your share

Life is GOD’S gift GOD’S present to you
To this gift you must remain true
Rest assured you have more than a clue
As potential greatness lives in you
you are fully equipped for what you must do
We are proud and we belong to you

In the future we will like a song
A memory to help you get along
It is wisdom that in life you gain
Apply it and you won’t know pain
Enjoy the sun and enjoy the rain
The seasons of life are there for your gain
And most of all remember this
Having you my babies has made our life so bliss

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

1 posted 2006-08-03 09:30 PM

What great sentiments for your children and how true it is that they make us better people. They're as blessed to have you for a parent as you are having them to love. I enjoyed this

Rae

elisalie16
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since 2006-07-12

Posts 118
new jersey

2 posted 2006-08-03 10:26 PM

beautiful

artexeres
Member

since 2006-08-01

Posts 156
south africa

3 posted 2006-08-04 12:38 PM

thank you kindly Sandgrain for you comments, i not only love them, they teach me sooo much.

SusieQ
Junior Member

since 2006-08-01

Posts 40
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2006-08-04 12:44 PM

Great poem!

artexeres
Member

since 2006-08-01

Posts 156
south africa

5 posted 2006-08-04 08:15 AM

thank you for taking the time to read it.

artexeres
Member

since 2006-08-01

Posts 156
south africa

6 posted 2006-08-05 01:53 PM

Thank you Elisalie16 and SusieQ, for taking the time to read and comment.

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